Unknowingly, I wrote 400,000 words and ended the first volume of this book. Looking back, I found that there were many unsatisfactory places, and it was still a bit rough compared to Lao Zhu’s expectations. Later, I thought about it, let’s leave it like this, after all, it is an online novel.
, writing six thousand words every day is a test for Lao Zhu, although among the ranks of writers, this speed is not even considered to be at the bottom.
Even if he can't put all his energy into writing it like a short story, Lao Zhu still hopes that the text can have a vivid beauty and chewable texture, which is more time-consuming than simply advancing the plot.
For example, if a character has a pronoun, Lao Zhu usually likes to have the character's name and pronoun appear alternately. Two names are used in turn, and three names are used in a cycle. This is not only for the clarity and fluency of writing.
, it’s also a quirk of Lao Zhu’s. When he sees the protagonist’s name appearing five times in a short sentence in some novels, Lao Zhu will feel creepy.
for example:
At this moment, the leader of the Guards decided to face his fate.
"Are you ready, partner?" Qiaopu buttoned up his mask with a click and raised his gun and shield.
"Come again!" The dragon knight launched another charge, rushing towards the mysterious king from another world.
As for the many names that appear in the book, even for minor characters, Lao Zhu has a huge database of classified names as a backing, because names are an important part of the characters' personality traits.
For example: Joop, the leader of the Guards, Adrian, the golden dragon knight, and the two scumbag supporting characters dragoon Bichir and Marshall who appeared in Chapter 46. These names are relatively typical common names in the British Isles.
I hope to express the tradition and obedience of the Golden Hammer.
Going back to the text itself, Lao Zhu himself likes musical language very much, and the text with beautiful rhythm is pleasing to the eye. See the works of the master Wang Zengqi; Lao Zhu's things are very different, but he also tries his best to adjust every sentence and every sentence.
The endings of paragraphs are flat and oblique, trying to create a sense of musical harmony.
For example, this sentence does not appear in the text: The companions were waiting in the pouring rain with their luggage on their backs. Cherry Crossing shrouded in light rain looked a bit gloomy. Jonah took the luggage from Xibi's hand, knowing that this would not be a one-time
A relaxing trip.
Having said so much, I just want to implore you not to read at a glance like a novice when reading. Only by reading slowly can you find many small and interesting details; at the same time, it is also a confession to the slow update speed. Lao Zhu spends every day
He spends a lot of time on books, but his output is very low, because Lao Zhu doesn’t want to pursue something too much and lose his devotion to literature itself. Is it hard? It’s hard. But seeing the slowly increasing number of collections and subscriptions, I can’t help but feel happy
comfort.
Everyone who can see this is a true scholar. Thank you all for your continued support! Your subscriptions and various votes are the greatest encouragement to Lao Zhu. With your support, Lao Zhu can continue to struggle with alternative online articles.
Keep going, thank you!
In the second volume, a grand stage will unfold in front of Jonah, but Gu Tie will get deeper and deeper into the mystery, and more and more negotiations will occur between the two worlds. Please pay attention to the second volume of "Throne of the Starry Sky": Sonata? Xiangnan