So far, in ten days, I have written 80,000 words. Even now, I am still full of energy in my heart. I believe I can persevere. This is a must.
Previously, through a certain channel, I asked a "symbol" instructor to help me read my book. He told me that the explanation at the beginning was a bit too many backgrounds and the scenes entered slowly... Tell me if I want to make this
If the quality of the book is better, you have to change it. I was busy calculating and copying the manuscript. I asked if I didn’t change it? He said it was OK at the time.
Later, some friends around me said similar things. Some friends told me that my book would not be exciting until Chapter 10. So, in order to save trouble, I continued to write under the guise of slow-heating...
Yesterday, Changjiang commented on my shortcomings in a long way. I knew I took it for granted...
I went online again before going to bed and found the comments of 17k instructor "Yiren Whispers". I suddenly realized it and suddenly realized it. I decided to modify the chapters I had posted, so I lost all sleepiness and thought a lot, which made me not fall asleep at all...
After getting up at around 7 o'clock this morning, I updated the chapter and started to modify it until now. I modified the wedge and the first and second chapters, and also added the goal of this modification is mainly the first volume, the first volume is to be big.
It is expected that four or five additional chapters will be added after the modification. The second volume will modify some chapters and content. The overall modification principle is to not affect the plot of the third volume and the fourth volume being written, making the first two volumes more passionate and more
vivid
From the words of my friends above, I found that the first volume of my life was not writing a novel, but was explaining a novel and telling a story, as if the memories of a third party were recalled, and there was no taste of a novel at all.
It is expected that the first volume can be modified today and tomorrow. The second volume will be completed before Wednesday, because classes will start on Monday. If there is not much time, please support me as always if you like my book. Thank you!
In order to ensure the quality of the modification, I decided to temporarily update one chapter every day, click 500+ update one chapter every day, add two chapters to one chapter, add ten VIPs to one chapter, add 20 flowers to one chapter...
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If you are powerful, you will explode. If a newcomer fails to become a god, he will become a good person!
With the support of my friends and the advice of the instructor "Yiren Whisper" I have already pulled up the sails of my long voyage...
This notice is not for Ning Mohen to finish revisions today. Thank you for your support in the early stage. From tomorrow, we will continue to update the following chapters. Two chapters a day, and it will explode from time to time (see click on the flowers)