Ah Li's pen has been sharpened, and I can clearly feel your writing style. It is very sophisticated and concise, but every stroke is striking. There are no unnecessary modifiers, no luxurious extravagance, and no unusual wording. It is concise and expressive.
It’s clear at a glance and very satisfying. It’s really enjoyable!
There is a fragment that I still remember freshly. Xiaoyu agreed to all the conditions that Bingbing Che told Xiaoyu, but that was not a hothead, it was a matter of careful consideration.
For this reason, I suddenly feel very sorry for Xiaoyu. She is too sober, so she is even more hurt. Sometimes, it is better to be stupid.
Next, when Bingbing Che said that he wanted her body and mind, but that didn't mean he would give his body and heart, I hated Bingbing Che a little bit. Emotions should be paid by both parties.
I think if Xiaoyu knew that, she would be very hurt. She surrendered her body and mind, but what about him?
Why should he let down Xiao Yu's affection... Alas, I felt so sorry for Xiao Yu at that time...
When I saw a certain stage in the middle, I briefly disliked Bingbing Che.
Why did he hurt Xiao Yu so unscrupulously, why did he pretend to be innocent after hurting her, why did he insist on letting others pay for himself but acted as if nothing had happened, and who surrendered to whom.
But later, as the article progressed, I began to feel sorry for this stubborn child.
Everyone is selfish in love. If you really love, how can you tolerate sharing... This sentence is right. When Xiao Che saw Xiao Yu and Xiao Nan "kissing", the jealousy in his heart almost reached his eyebrows.
At that time, I was still thinking that according to this vulgar plot, I should abuse Xiaoyu as much as I want and wrong her, but he didn't. He was considerate of her, trusted her, and tolerated her. His water-like tenderness made me feel a deep warmth.
and moved. Although he was a little fickle at the beginning, he became more and more charming.
Let’s talk about Glacier Che. I really didn’t like him at first, for the reasons I’ve mentioned before, but he is also a poor child. He has experienced so much pain since he was a child, and his sister was even bought into a brothel. So he is
What kind of faith did you have to survive? It must have been a very tangled matter.
Finally, let’s talk about Xiao Nan. If I look at him alone, I quite like him. He is warm and bright. He is always behind Xiao Yu, watching the person he likes fall into the arms of another person. I can understand this feeling. Overall, I feel
Said that he is a poor person who cannot get love.
I have written so much, but overall, this article is very, very beautiful and very attractive. Everyone has their own personality and difficulties. When you feel sorry for this person, you can't blame the other person, and you feel so happy.
There are ups and downs along with the article, but I sincerely hope that Xiaoyu can get the happiness he wants.