While Xiao Fuzi went to the other side to inquire about the situation, Liu Qingxi had also received the news and hurried from the backyard to the front lobby.
When Xiao Fuzi came back, he saw Liu Qingxi, Uncle Fu and others sitting in the lobby waiting, and even the little fox and wolf and dog were watching.
"I got the stuff!"
Xiao Fuzi hurried back while talking, and then quickly placed the comic strip in his hand on the table.
Without opening a word, everyone naturally picked up a comic strip and looked at it carefully. Even the wolf and the dog were not idle, holding a comic strip in front of them with their mouths.
However, this guy only glanced at it twice, curled his lips, turned around and stopped looking again. With a look of disgust in his eyes, he secretly complained: "What the hell did you draw!"
As for the others, looking at the comic strips in their hands, they seemed to be reluctant to comment, and they all remained silent.
"How is it? How do you feel after watching it?"
Finally, Su Pingan broke the silence with a smile.
Seeing that no one spoke, he first looked at Xiao Fuzi and asked by name: "Xiao Fuzi, tell me how you feel."
Xiao Fuzi was stunned for a moment, as if he didn't expect that Su Pingan would ask him. He immediately panicked, and then hesitantly said: "I...I...I don't know how to draw, I'm afraid I can't speak well."
"It's okay. We are all our own people here. It doesn't matter if you can't say it right. Just say it according to your own feelings..."
Su Ping'an gave encouragement.
Hearing what Su Ping'an said, Xiao Fuzi felt a little relieved, and then finally plucked up the courage to say: "I don't know what to say, but when I look at the comic strip opposite and compare it with Brother Su's comic strip, I always feel like
There is something more, and then something is missing..."
"..."
Everyone was stunned after hearing this answer.
Then Little Fuzi received a slap on the head. Uncle Fu said in a lecturing tone: "What are you talking about? What is missing, what is too much, please explain clearly."
Xiao Fuzi held his head in grievance and said: "Uncle, I just said that I can't tell. I just talked about my feelings..."
"..."
Uncle Fu stared, as if he hated him for not living up to expectations.
Su Ping'an smiled when he saw the reaction of the uncle and nephew. However, he could understand what Xiao Fuzi meant, but there were other people's opinions, so he was not in a hurry to help Xiao Fuzi explain, but took advantage of the situation and looked towards
He asked Uncle Fu and said, "Uncle Fu, where are you?!"
Although Uncle Fu was the shopkeeper, neither Su Ping'an nor Liu Qingxi ever treated him as an outsider, but as an elder.
Moreover, as a restaurant manager, Uncle Fu has seen many people and experienced many things, so sometimes his vision is more sophisticated.
Uncle Fu didn't expect that Su Ping'an would turn around and ask him. The majestic posture he had just taught Xiao Fuzi immediately collapsed, and then he looked a little embarrassed and said: "This... I can't say this old man, if you really want to
If you want me to say something, I will also tell you how I feel..."
"good!"
"Old man, I just think that the words in this comic strip seem to be too colorful, just like the paintings on display in the art gallery. Each one is very beautiful, and a little too beautiful...
"
"Uncle, are you expressing your opinion? Are you praising the other party?!"
Before Fu Bo finished speaking, Xiao Fuzi felt that something was getting more and more wrong the more he listened, and couldn't help but murmured in a low voice.
After hearing this, Uncle Fu immediately slapped Xiao Fuzi again, and then said: "What do you know? I haven't finished speaking yet. What I mean is that the color of this comic strip is too strong and it is too beautiful. Then I
When you read a comic book, you are not reading a story, but a picture, do you understand?!"
Su Ping'an understood this.
What Fu Bo means is that the pictures in the comic strips are a bit overwhelming and steal the limelight of the story. This will make people feel that they are not reading a story, but just a picture album.
Hearing this, Su Pingan had to admire Uncle Fu.
Older gingers are more spicy!
Although the latter doesn't know how to draw, his eyesight is very good!
When Liu Qingxi saw that everyone had expressed her feelings, she pondered for a moment, and then expressed her own point of view, saying: "My first impression after reading this comic was the same as that of Fu Bo. The proportions of the paintings are heavier.
Unlike our comic strips, the story content and pictures complement each other.
Moreover, in this comic strip, the painting style does not seem to match the whole story. It makes people feel as if the story is telling a "contemporary fantasy" story about literary cultivation and becoming a saint, but the painting style is like a "Liao Zhai" type.
The desolate and beautiful style, the story and the pictures are completely different styles..."
These words made Su Ping'an couldn't help but nodded in approval.
She finally mentioned the second question in this comic strip.
In fact, whether it is Xiao Fuzi or Fu Bo, their views are actually the same, that is, the proportions of the comic strips are out of balance and the colors of the paintings are relatively heavy, which steals the limelight of the story.
Xiao Fuzi talks a little more and a little less. The original intention is to draw a little more and tell a little less.
Secondly, the last one that Liu Qingxi just mentioned is that the painting style is wrong.
The story and the style of the painting are completely inconsistent, which makes the whole comic look a bit weird.
The root cause of this is that Lang Ziming and Song Shanqiao are each responsible for what they are good at and do not communicate well.
The most important thing about a comic strip is that the text and painting style should be consistent. Only in this way will it look more immersive.
And there is another point, which is also very important, and it is impossible for laymen to understand.
That’s the screen jump!
To put it more simply, it is picture editing.
Each page of a comic book story is accompanied by a page of pictures, and the pictures on a page range from one frame to six frames.
But a page of stories needs to tell a lot, so the things that need to be drawn will be selective. Some narrations will be left to the text below, and some exciting scenes of fierce fighting will be left to the pictures. These are also
There is division of labor.
But in the comic strip of Golden House Restaurant, what he saw was that the artist had drawn almost every sentence in detail.
There may even be situations where one sentence contains one picture or even multiple pictures, which results in the story and pictures progressing very slowly, seriously delaying the plot progress.
When customers first read it, they will think that the illustrations are well illustrated and carefully drawn, but after a long time of reading, they will feel that it is too nonsense.
This is the result of incorrect "editing" of the picture.
Of course, the comic strip had just come out, so it was impossible for the other party to know all of this all at once, not to mention that the two of them were still working separately, so it was impossible for them to be aware of these issues.
It was also because of this that when Su Ping'an learned that the Golden House Restaurant was also going to publish a comic book, he was so confident that they would not succeed.
Because the comic strip seems simple, but in fact it is not simple at all.