Seeing Long Xuan's confusion, Su Pingan gave Long Xuan a simple explanation.
There is nothing wrong with the structure of Gao Wentian's story, but the setting of the story's background is inappropriate. He wrote about the continent ten thousand years ago, and he wrote it in a way that is close to the flow of life.
Thousands of years ago, the Zongheng Continent was still in a barbaric era. At that time, even the Great Xuan Kingdom had not been established, and demon cultivators were not very prosperous. Only some rare monsters had just sprouted their minds. Although such an era was ferocious and difficult to survive, for
For an 'immortal', it's still too devoid of challenges.
If an 'immortal' can't even find an opponent who can match him, then how can he play a training role?
This is like a tiger entering a herd of sheep. Apart from killing all the people, there is no challenge at all. Of course, at first, everyone will feel happy when the tiger rushes and kills the sheep, but the helplessness and look of the tiger are very satisfying.
You will feel tired later.
Therefore, Gao Wentian's story has almost locked up the development of the rest of his story from the very beginning.
In the primitive era, the immortal couldn't seem to find anything difficult except fighting against the harsh environment around him. This was his innate bottleneck.
What's more, he hasn't set up a 'cultivation' system at all, which makes his story even thinner.
Of course, if Su Ping'an were to write it, he would actually have a way to remedy the situation, which is to set a level for 'immortals', such as golden immortal, mysterious immortal, immortal emperor, etc.; he could also give 'immortal' levels
''s fall is set as a result of a 'fight between immortals', which makes people more expectant.
But obviously, Su Ping'an would not guide the other party foolishly.
When he explained to Long Xuan, he only mentioned the shortcomings and did not explain the solutions. However, Long Xuan was shocked. "You only read the beginning of a story, and you can not only see its shortcomings."
, can we still see the future development of the story? Is this the strength of top calligraphy and literary cultivators? This is too exaggerated!"
Su Ping'an just smiled at this, and then continued to lower his head to write. At the same time, he curled his lips slightly and muttered to himself: "When it comes to immortals, no one understands immortals better than me. If you write about immortals, then I will have no choice but to kill the immortals."
'It's up!"
Looking down at the manuscript in front of Su Pingan, his first sentence was clearly that famous prophecy.
Heaven and earth are unkind and regard all things as stupid dogs!
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Downstairs, in front of the literary list.
After reading the first page of Gao Wentian's manuscript, the faces of the people around him varied.
After a long time, someone smacked his lips and said, "What this 'immortal' described is quite interesting. He could travel thousands of miles in an instant, think of thunder, think of storm... He is simply more powerful than the Confucian sages and others!"
"Yes, and the beginning is also a bit interesting. The immortal fell to the earth and became an ordinary person. He was still in the barbaric period when our Daxuan Kingdom did not exist. It was not easy to survive at that time!"
"Although this is the case, I don't think it's anything. At that time, there were at most natural disasters and floods. There were a little more thunder and fire, and even the monsters and beasts didn't develop spiritual intelligence. He lived there as an immortal. It seemed that apart from busy work, eating and drinking,
There’s nothing else to do. I’m not too optimistic about the rest of the story…”
"I don't like this style either, it always feels a bit boring..."
"No, I think it's quite real. Isn't this kind of description of trivial matters in life and fighting against natural disasters exactly what people should do during that period?"
Soon the surrounding audience was divided into three groups.
Some people like this style of life-style writing. They like to see how an immortal survives in the wilderness and deals with various disasters. Some people don't like this type of writing and find it boring. It's just a matter of going back and forth, except for natural disasters.
And the dilemma in life, there is nothing else, it is boring.
There is also a side of the wait-and-see group. They think the beginning of the story is somewhat interesting, but they are also worried that the subsequent plot will be the same as the opposition said and that it will be boring, so they maintain a wait-and-see attitude for the time being.
But in general, there are still many people who like Gao Wentian's book. After all, it is a relatively novel way of writing about the subject of "immortal", and the opening structure is indeed interesting, so everyone is looking forward to it.
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And in such a short period of time, "Immortal" has reached the top of the literary list, and the total number of readers has exceeded the 50,000 mark, and it is still rising rapidly.
At the same time, the first page of the manuscript with the word 'Immortal' printed on it had begun to be circulated throughout the Divine Capital City, and more and more people heard the news and rushed to Wang Street.
…
In Wangyue Tower, the entire sixth floor of Wangyue Tower has now been closed to the public.
In the nine rooms on the sixth floor, there is currently a literary cultivator living in each. They are not young. The eldest one looks like he is sixty or seventy years old, and his beard is all white. Even the youngest one is
He is also in his forties.
They are Wenzong Wenxiu who Wangyuelou invited to participate in the battle with Su Ping'an this time.
They are either frowning in thought or writing urgently, all carefully pondering the stories they write.
In another exquisite attic next to them, there is a young and handsome figure, who is also swiping his pen and ink here, and there is a calm and confident demeanor in his every move.
This person is none other than one of the two protagonists today, the proud son of the Gao family... Gao Wentian!
Next to him, Gao Chong looked at his eldest son writing a book confidently and calmly, nodding his head frequently, with a look of satisfaction and relief in his eyes.
At this time, the attic door creaked, and someone suddenly backed away from the outside. Then Gao Jin burst in with a happy face and shouted: "Dad, brother, good news. Brother's 'immortal' has just
One letter entered the essay list and immediately topped the list, which shows everyone's recognition of the 'immortal', and now my eldest brother is sure to win!"
Seeing Gao Jin being so reckless, Gao Chong immediately frowned, and then scolded: "Bastard, didn't you see that your elder brother is writing, why did you rush in so anxiously, in case I disturb you?
What should I do with my brother’s writing ideas?”
Gao Jin grinned, "I'm so happy."
"It doesn't matter, I just finished writing this page, so it doesn't bother me..."
At this time, Gao Jin happened to have written another page of manuscript, and then he straightened up and looked at the story he had just finished. After examining it, he nodded, and then asked someone to send it out again, preparing to seal it.
In the essay list, he looked up at Gao Chong and Gao Jin, and then said: "Besides, isn't it normal for my book to be at the top of the list? What's there to be excited about?"
Hearing what the eldest brother said, Gao Jin twitched slightly, feeling that the eldest brother was worthy of being the eldest brother, and he was still as confident as ever.
But this is too pretentious.
It's just that as his younger brother, he was embarrassed to say the last sentence, and the more confident Gao Wentian showed, the more at ease he felt. After all, he was fighting on his behalf in this battle.
Then Gao Wentian asked again: "By the way, has Su Pingan's new book been released?"
"not yet……"
Just when Gao Jin opened his mouth to answer, a loud shout suddenly came from downstairs.
"It's out, it's out, the Su family's new book is out..."
Hearing these words, the eyes of the father and son of the Gao family were shocked. Then, without waiting for Gao Wentian's instructions, Gao Chong just nodded to Gao Jin, and Gao Jin hurried downstairs. Not long after, Gao Jin came.
He walked in with a two-page manuscript and an ugly expression on his face.
"What's wrong?"
When Gao Chong saw his son's ugly face, a ray of light immediately shot out from his eyes, and he asked with an evil expression.
Gao Jin looked angrily and said, "This Su Pingan, the title of his book is too outrageous. He is deliberately targeting elder brother."
Gao Wentian didn't want to listen to his ramblings, so he snatched the manuscript from the former's hand, then opened the page and took a look, and saw the dazzling title.
